My essay and its marking criteria:
[paste both]. Mark it as an examiner
would: where it earns marks, where it
loses them, and the three changes
worth most for least work.

Critique My Essay Like an Examiner

Marked against the actual criteria, with efficient fixes.

Prompt

Here's my essay and the criteria it'll be marked against: [paste both]. Mark it as an examiner would — where it earns marks, where it loses them, and the three changes worth the most for the least work.