Here's my writing:
[paste]. Rewrite so it
says who does what, cut
hedging — and show two
or three before/after
pairs so I see the pattern.

Make My Writing Direct

Shown as before-and-after, so the pattern is learnable.

Prompt

Here's something I wrote: [paste it]. Rewrite it so it says who does what, cut the hedging, and show me the before and after of two or three sentences so I can see the pattern rather than just take the result.