A few pages of my script: [paste].
Check formatting against standard
conventions, then how the page reads
visually: where the white space is,
where an eye would start skimming.

Check the Format and the Pace

How the page looks, which is how it reads.

Prompt

Here's a few pages of my script: [paste them]. Check the formatting against standard conventions, then tell me how the page reads visually — where the white space is, and where a reader's eye would start skimming.