My draft: [paste]. Cut it by
a third without losing any
argument. Then tell me what
you removed, and which of
those I might genuinely want
back.

Cut It by a Third

A third shorter, with the cuts itemised for appeal.

Prompt

Here's my draft: [paste it]. Cut it by a third without losing any argument — then tell me what you removed and, of that, what I might genuinely want back.