A paragraph I wrote: [paste].
Rewrite each sentence more
clearly, then show before and
after side by side with one
word on what changed: cut,
reordered, made concrete.

Edit Me at the Sentence Level

Line by line, with the reason for each change in one word.

Prompt

Here's a paragraph I wrote: [paste it]. Rewrite each sentence to be clearer, then show the before and after side by side with one word on what changed — cut, reordered, or made concrete.