My text: [paste]. A line edit —
tighten each sentence, fix rhythm and
word choice — keeping my voice and
structure, with changes shown inline.

A Line Edit, Not a Rewrite

Tightened line by line, voice left intact.

Prompt

Here's my text: [paste it]. Do a line edit — tighten each sentence, fix rhythm and word choice — but keep my voice and my structure. Show changes inline so I can see exactly what moved.