My draft: [paste]. Remove every
hedge — "I think", "perhaps", "it
could be argued" — then show the two
places a hedge was doing real work and
should come back.

Take the Hedging Out

Hedges removed, except the two that were earning their place.

Prompt

Here's my draft: [paste it]. Remove every hedge — "I think", "perhaps", "it could be argued" — then show me the two places where a hedge was doing real work and should come back.