My paragraphs are fine but
the piece feels disjointed:
[paste]. Show where each join
fails and rewrite the
transitions — no "furthermore"
or "in conclusion".

Fix the Joins Between Paragraphs

The joins, repaired without the words that paper over them.

Prompt

My paragraphs are fine individually but the piece feels disjointed: [paste it]. Show me where each join fails and rewrite the transitions — without using "furthermore", "moreover", or "in conclusion".